My Purpose for this Blog

I have successfully written and published non-fiction books. Recently I have written two fiction books. The latest is a spy novel. Since I am new to writing fiction I have decided to post the chapters of this new book in this blog so others can comment. I am hoping others will comment and advise on the characters I have created and on the story plot. I am a member of a writers group and that has taught me others are a good judge of fiction. After I have posted this new book and received comments I will do a final edit incorporating the comments that I feel improve the  book for readers.

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